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Nowadays the use of the internet for education is questionable. Some people suggest that the internet facilitates the educational life of students, while another group says that they use it only for cheating.

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At the present time, the
internet
 takes part in school life more instantly. Some people believe that the
internet
 affects
students
 in a positive way, while others do not agree with that.
This
 essay will consider the advantages and disadvantages of entering the
internet
 into
students
’ lives. To start with, the one major advantage of using the
internet
 in education is the access to a huge amount of information. It provides a lot of different materials
such
 as video tutorials, online books and many others.
Students
 are able to find any particular information and resources that they need, for doing their home assignments, researches and projects. What is more, the
internet
 has allowed
students
 to be in constant touch with their teachers or classmates from any part of the world.
Students
 can take classes from a college or university in any place where they have access to the
internet
.
However
, there are disadvantages to the
internet
 for
students
.
First
 of all, thanks to the
internet
, there are more chances that
students
 are simply cheating from lots of websites. They can use various applications to solve maths tasks or copy their essays.
As a result
,
students
 have become more uneducated and have started relying on outside help.
In addition
 to that, the information, which provides on the
internet
, is sometimes inaccurate and untrustworthy.
For instance
, a lot of the chronological dates, historical events or even the solution of any tasks could be written wrong. In conclusion, using the
internet
 in education is still an uncertain problem.
Therefore
, I think, the positive aspects are balanced out by the negative ones.
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