Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communicate had has a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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suggested been that more and more young
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communicate by electric products like mobile
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and computers in
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recent years, most
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think that it's harmful to the development abilities of reading and writing. In my opinion, it's undoubted that will have disadvantage for our
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skills.
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, it's true that
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and computers are convenient and high effective,
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, most of
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can hardly self-controlled so that will cause overuse of electric products. Overuse will distract
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of young
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during reading
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extent.
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, notifications of various apps pop up on our
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at any moment, it
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strong appeal for us so that our potential aware enter
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app. Naturally, we couldn't
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use electric devices for several hours, our eyes will feel a little ache, and
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to focus on
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degree.
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,computers and mobile
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are more likely to hinder the frequency of handwriting, as well as the formal grammatical structures in writing. In our daily life, we used to send
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as simple and fast as possible by
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because
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always pursue effectiveness and shortcut.
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, writing has to a person has a strong ability of linguistic logic.
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, communication use
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compared to normal writing look similar, actually, it has significant differences. In conclusion,
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electric devices could boost the current development of society, it is able to us degeneration of reading and writing skills.
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