It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at en early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this dictinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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the younger generation's mind to emphasize the distinction between upright and

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behavior

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.

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Moreover

, disciplining them is a vital key to youngsters development. I

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to penalize

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young adults,

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I will illustrate the various method to discipline

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children with the help of the father and mother along with instructors.

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with, the parents and the teachers should find a light and better way to impose

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sanctions

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and punishment

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the children.

Firstly

they can penalize them if they see the actual incident or caught them

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committing

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for example

, the young students

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not doing his or her

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homework

and

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on playing on there gadgets, as a guardian or tutors, they can

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function

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proper way by taking

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devices and explain the period of time that they are banned to use it.

Secondly

, they can use

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method,

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as grounding them and prohibiting them to play with

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friends or

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outside,

although

it has a negative effect on them, for sure they will

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the cause and effect of

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action.

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action can help them to be mature and develop

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sense

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of understanding of what is wrong and right.

In addition

, they can use a traditional method of

disciplining

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for

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they can clean the house, wash the dishes, mop the floor or do

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own laundry chores as a consequence

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misdeed, in

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a way, we can teach them how to be responsible to there decision making and to know the effect of there action. Particularly when they will encounter

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, they will know how to handle it.

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Furthermore

, allowing them to experience punishment will help them to develop

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critical thinking and sense of maturity. In conclusion, there are many ways to

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discipline

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children, the parents and teachers

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vital

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role

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how they will implement

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kind of punishment. Sanctions and penalty is a part of there childhood life,

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to develop there understanding on what is good and what is evil.

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will be

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on until they become

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a full grown up

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grown ups

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