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Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #car-free #air #pollution
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illustrates
illustrate
 average
years
 of schooling, numbers of scientists and technicians, and spending on research and development in developing as well as developed nations. Figures are given for 1980 and 1990. It is apparent that the main trend of participation in education and
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science
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, but it was much higher in the industrialised
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 compared to that of developing
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. people from developing nations attended school for
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 of almost 3
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, with only a slight increase from 1980 to 1990.
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, the figures for
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industrialised
industrialized
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 rose from only 9
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 almost doubled to about 70 people per 1000.
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 spending in research and development saw a dramatic increase in these
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, reaching $350 billion in 1990. In the contrast, the numbers of science workers remained only under 20 per 1000 people, and research spending fell about $50 billion to only $25 billion
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • emissions standards
  • renewable energy
  • environmentally friendly
  • public transportation
  • pedestrian zones
  • commuter behavior
  • awareness
  • incentives
  • air pollution
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