Medical services should be run by profit-making companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the matter of

health

care

has become controversial. While some people are against the idea of these basic

services

being run by

companies

whose target is

profit

, many people

favor

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the

control

of

profit

-seeking

companies

over medical

services

. Personally, I am not on the same side of corporation

control

over the

health

care

system

.

This

essay is aimed to explain the reasons behind the view that

companies

should not run the

health

care

system

. To start off, when

health

services

are in the hand of people who want

profit

, citizens can be charged extremely high prices for simple things

such

as a visit to the physician.

That is

because

companies

put

profit

above all, so they will not

care

about the

quality

of the

services

they give to the general public. To illustrate, in America where most healthcare

belong

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to private

companies

, the

cost

for medicines and other

services

is much higher in comparison with that in European nations.

Consequently

, when American citizens experienced any

health

issue, they will not want to be admitted to a hospital or even call an ambulance due to the

cost

.

Moreover

, when the matter of

health

is in the hands of corporations, they will try their hardest to earn the most

profit

out of every

products

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by reducing qualities. Fewer

quality

products can greatly decrease the

cost

for

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material and assembly. To give an illustration, millions of mechanical ventilation machines have been sent from China to India in the Covid-19 pandemic, some of whose components are replaced by lower

quality

, less expensive alternatives.

Thirdly

, with the

control

of corporations, the

health

care

system

will be monopolized by a small number of big

companies

, which limits the

patients

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patient's

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options for where and who they can be treated. As monopoly in

health

care

prevents the emergence of a more efficient

system

, patients still have to pay more because there

is

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no more options. To give an example, Johnson & Johnson holds a lead in developing medical devices, pharmaceuticals, and consumer packaged goods, with 2 more

companies

that

control

the

health

care

systems in America. To summarize, due to the

cost

,

quality

, and monopoly of medical

services

and products, I am against corporations having

control

over the

health

care

system

. Nick, 12:33 PM Some countries have introduced a

law

to limit working

hours

for

employees

. Why is

this

law

introduced? Do you think it is a positive or

a

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negative development? A number of nations have imposed a

law

restricting the number of

hours

employees

can spend at work.

This

limit is made because of the declining

health

of

office

workers

. Personally, I believe that

this

law

is a beneficial development. To start off, in recent years there is an increase in

health

problems caused by sitting too long in an

office

. The main cause of

this

is the lack of opportunities for any physical activities or exercises of

office

workers

, which is due to overtime and long work

hours

. To illustrate, without any

time

for exercises,

employees

can suffer from obesity, joints inflammation, and cardiovascular diseases.

Consequently

, governments have to restrain the business hour to give

employees

enough

time

for exercises to maintain their well-being.

Moreover

, work-life balance is

also

crucial, as a lack of communication with family or friends can lead to psychological issues, which hinders both society and families. Having a chance to take

care

of themselves can boost the productivity of the

workers

significantly, as well as prolong their available work span.

In addition

to

this

, more

time

with their kids can greatly strengthen families bonds.

Hours

that must be spent in offices can be utilized for taking

care

children

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, as they require a lot of

care

. To summarize, imposing restraint on the duration of the

office

hour brings about many benefits in different aspects of societies. As

workers

have more

time

, they can do more exercise to maintain fitness and improve their relationships.