Medical services should be run by profit-making companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the matter of

health

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has become controversial. While some people are against the idea of these basic

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being run by

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whose target is

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, many people

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the

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of

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-seeking

companies

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over medical

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. Personally, I am not on the same side of corporation

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over the

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.

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essay is aimed to explain the reasons behind the view that

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should not run the

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care

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system

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. To start off, when

health

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services

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are in the hand of people who want

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, citizens can be charged extremely high prices for simple things

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as a visit to the physician.

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because

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put

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above all, so they will not

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about the

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of the

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they give to the general public. To illustrate, in America where most healthcare

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to private

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, the

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for medicines and other

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is much higher in comparison with that in European nations.

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, when American citizens experienced any

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issue, they will not want to be admitted to a hospital or even call an ambulance due to the

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.

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, when the matter of

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is in the hands of corporations, they will try their hardest to earn the most

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out of every

products

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by reducing qualities. Fewer

quality

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products can greatly decrease the

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material and assembly. To give an illustration, millions of mechanical ventilation machines have been sent from China to India in the Covid-19 pandemic, some of whose components are replaced by lower

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, less expensive alternatives.

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, with the

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of corporations, the

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care

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system

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will be monopolized by a small number of big

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, which limits the

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options for where and who they can be treated. As monopoly in

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care

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prevents the emergence of a more efficient

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, patients still have to pay more because there

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no more options. To give an example, Johnson & Johnson holds a lead in developing medical devices, pharmaceuticals, and consumer packaged goods, with 2 more

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that

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the

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systems in America. To summarize, due to the

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,

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, and monopoly of medical

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and products, I am against corporations having

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over the

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care

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system

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. Nick, 12:33 PM Some countries have introduced a

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to limit working

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for

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. Why is

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law

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introduced? Do you think it is a positive or

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negative development? A number of nations have imposed a

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restricting the number of

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employees

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can spend at work.

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limit is made because of the declining

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of

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workers

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. Personally, I believe that

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is a beneficial development. To start off, in recent years there is an increase in

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problems caused by sitting too long in an

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. The main cause of

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is the lack of opportunities for any physical activities or exercises of

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workers

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, which is due to overtime and long work

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. To illustrate, without any

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for exercises,

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can suffer from obesity, joints inflammation, and cardiovascular diseases.

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, governments have to restrain the business hour to give

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enough

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for exercises to maintain their well-being.

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, work-life balance is

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crucial, as a lack of communication with family or friends can lead to psychological issues, which hinders both society and families. Having a chance to take

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of themselves can boost the productivity of the

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significantly, as well as prolong their available work span.

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to

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, more

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with their kids can greatly strengthen families bonds.

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that must be spent in offices can be utilized for taking

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children

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, as they require a lot of

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. To summarize, imposing restraint on the duration of the

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hour brings about many benefits in different aspects of societies. As

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have more

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, they can do more exercise to maintain fitness and improve their relationships.