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Language teacher should concentrate only on giving positive feedback when students do good work rather than on criticizing their bad work. To what extent you agree or disagree?

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Language
 professor should focus only on good feedback if students do great work while other think that they have
also
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 negative feedback when undergraduates do not good tasks.
This
 essay agrees that observations are fundamental for the development of
language
 skills.
Firstly
, to reach
an
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 high level of knowledge and good scores in
language
 tests a person must be able to reduce all the small errors.
Secondly
, only when a scholar recognises mistakes can really improve and not repeat the errors in the
future
.
In
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one
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 hand, correct all inaccuracy is really important to allow students to improve in a foreign
language
. Tests like IELTS and CAE are really difficult and only with
a
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intensive
preparation
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 you will get a good mark. In fact, in these
tests
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 every single error
are
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 evaluated and can reduce your general score even the small ones. To
istance
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instance
distance
, many students do not reach their dream mark because they prefer
study
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 alone without the help of
a
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 expert that helps them to reduce all the errors.
In
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 the other hand,
to understand
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 failures is the best way to acquire confidence and to develop a deep knowledge of the
language
. In fact, when a professor explains your mistakes his purpose is to avoid that you repeat them in the
future
. If a student understands that he will not repeat in the
future
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 confidence
that is
 necessary to perform better in the
future
.
For example
, I noted that when I started to be followed by
a
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english
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 teacher I fastly recognised my weakness and her advice have been precious in my process of learning a new idiom. To conclude, negative advice
are
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 essentials in the growth of new
language
 competencies because only in
this
 way you can effectively step up in different languages and avoid the same mistakes in the
future
.
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