A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not manage correctly. Describe the merits and demerits of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh it's drawbacks.

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entertainment matter, whether to positive aspects are more important than the negative ones or not.

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trend and I explain why I do not consider it more advantageous.

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with, there are several downsides of tourism when it comes to pollution and

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the hotspot. Quite often, tourists carry a bag of snacks along with the visitation, and, in the absence of a trashcan, some rather throw it away in the environment than grab and discharge it properly.

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, preserving the exposed material can be

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. Some hotspots make available heritage materials to people and, despite putting pieces of

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to preserve

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, people insist in follow their own will.

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, visitors commonly take photos with

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turned on inside museums,

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it is prohibited.

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, some upsides can be pointed regarding tourism, as government incentives and the improvement of the local

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financial gains. As a matter of fact, many famous places used to be forgotten and after catching attention and being recognized by tourist, started receiving incentives from the government to expand.

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, another good point is that local markets could start increasing due to the rising movement. To illustrate, after a rainy season,

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useless and abandoned construction in Jericoacoara, a Brazilian city, filled up with water a began to be used as a lake. Afterwards, local residents closed the place and started charging visitors, augmenting their incomes. To conclude, both arguments have their merits and demerits.

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, in my opinion, the advantages do not outweigh the disadvantages, due to the fact that a lot of city and

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impacts are a result

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people's

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, increasing trash waste and destroying the patrimony.