A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not manage correctly. Describe the merits and demerits of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh it's drawbacks.
It is often argued about the outcomes of visiting places
to
entertainment matter, whether to positive aspects are more important than the negative ones or not. Change preposition
for
This
essay will discuss both sides of this
trend and I explain why I do not consider it more advantageous.
To begin
with, there are several downsides of tourism when it comes to pollution and preservating
the hotspot. Quite often, tourists carry a bag of snacks along with the visitation, and, in the absence of a trashcan, some rather throw it away in the environment than grab and discharge it properly. Correct your spelling
preserving
preservation
Moreover
, preserving the exposed material can be challeging
. Some hotspots make available heritage materials to people and, despite putting pieces of Correct your spelling
challenging
Correct your spelling
advice
advices
to preserve Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
it
, people insist in follow their own will. Correct pronoun usage
them
For instance
, visitors commonly take photos with flash
turned on inside museums, Add an article
the flash
although
it is prohibited.
On the other hand
, some upsides can be pointed regarding tourism, as government incentives and the improvement of the local residents
financial gains. As a matter of fact, many famous places used to be forgotten and after catching attention and being recognized by tourist, started receiving incentives from the government to expand. Change to a genitive case
resident's
residents'
Furthermore
, another good point is that local markets could start increasing due to the rising movement. To illustrate, after a rainy season, an
useless and abandoned construction in Jericoacoara, a Brazilian city, filled up with water a began to be used as a lake. Afterwards, local residents closed the place and started charging visitors, augmenting their incomes.
To conclude, both arguments have their merits and demerits. Change the article
a
Although
, in my opinion, the advantages do not outweigh the disadvantages, due to the fact that a lot of city and environment
impacts are a result Replace the word
environmental
from
people's Change preposition
of
irresponsability
, increasing trash waste and destroying the patrimony.Correct your spelling
irresponsibility
responsibility
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