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For many, shopping malls are great places to spend their leisure time and meet othe.People, however, in the past mostly visited shopping malls when necessary.To what extent do you think this is a negative trend.

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In these
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 days, shopping complexes are majorly found in many cities and they have served many purposes, more than just selling products.
People
 in the past usually visited malls to purchase things, whereas now it has become a source of entertainment, fun and to spend spare time during weekends.In my opinion, I consider that these plazas have brought positive outcomes by serving
masses
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 in a range of ways.
Firstly
, it has been observed that these
gallerias
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galleries
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 are more than just simply shopping complex, buying clothes have
also
 become an enjoyable activity even there is no need for purchase, many individuals adopt
this
 as a therapeutic activity to relieve stress and anxiety and it will be not wrong to call
such
people
 shopaholic.
For example
, many doctors suggest
people
 with depression
to
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perform
such
 activities, which gives them happiness regardless
the
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 fact that it is shopping which involves
certain
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a certain
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 expenditure.
In addition
, shopping malls incorporated shops where
children's'
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children
 can take
ride
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a ride
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 and play various games, tickets are sold in the form of coupons through which kids can collect point and win toys and money
also
.
However
, parents show interest along with young ones in these stores. Another positive aspects related to plazas are it
contain
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 multiplex cinemas, families can enjoy
movie
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the movie
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 along with sumptuous food and drinks which are served on the seats with the help of attendants .
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, pizza, pasta, noodle, popcorn and whole menus are provided.Masses have become more accustomed to shopping complexes as compare to simple cinema halls that were present in the past.
People
 are thoroughly enjoying all of these facilities and consider them as part and parcel of life nowadays. In conclusion, In my
opinion
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 shopping centres have given tough competition to
other kind
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another kind
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 of stores which merely sell products or cinema hall where
people
 can only watch movies.Bringing all the facilities under
single
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a single
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 roof has not only facilitated
people
 but
also
 expand their fun time and make it
more
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a more
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 mesmerizing activity than just shopping.
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