Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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few decades, it can be observed that amount of trash increased astronomically.
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essay will examine; problems behind
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and what steps authorities should talk to alleviate
such
problem. To commence with, there are myriad of reasons that cause the huge quantity of
garbage
.
Firstly
, one of the root cause of
this
problem is
the
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unethical human activities.To elaborate
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, people purchase unnecessary products which they don’t need ,
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activity of the humans create more and more household
garbage
. Apart from
this
, industrialisation
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another cause behind
this
because
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huge gain
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dollar companies throw they chemicals and other rubbish in rivers
this things
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contaminated rivers and
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not only humans but marine life
also
have to suffer because of
this
.
Moreover
, it is indeed
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a fact
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that the
hospitals
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hospital's
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garbage
such
as ; injections ,needle and bottles are
also
the reason behind
this
, though it can not be controlled as it is very essential. On the other side, there are many proactive steps which should be definitely applied by the governments to mitigate
such
issue.
Firstly
, in order to shun unnecessary
buying
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the government should impose high taxes on those products which
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used by humans regularly.
Secondly
, the government should implement strict regulations and make some laws for those industries
who
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throw their trash in rivers.
Lastly
, the government should initiate agenda for spreading valiance about throwing
garbage
to any place as it is very detrimental for
environment
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. In conclusion,
although
there are many reasons behind producing the huge quality of rubbish
but
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the aforementioned solutions can make
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impact and they have
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the power
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to revolutionise people’s ideology.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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