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some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Universities these days offer a wide range of options to the
students
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 when it comes to choosing
subjects
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. There are some people who encourage the
students
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 to
study
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 whichever subject they like, while there are others who do not and think that
students
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 should be taught only the
subjects
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 of future importance that are
Science
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 and
Technology
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. It is often believed that
students
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 should
study
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 whichever subject they find interesting. I
also
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 believe the same.
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, I
also
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 think that one must acquire the basic
knowledge
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 in
Science
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 and
Technology
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, as there is no doubt in the fact that these
subjects
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 are of future importance.
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 is a digital era, everything is governed by
technology
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, having no
knowledge
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 of it can make life tougher for
students
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 in future.
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, when online classes were introduced during the pandemic, many
students
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 in my class face difficulty in submitting their assignments because of their non-scientific educational background.
On the other hand
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, forcing
students
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 only to
study
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subjects
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 of
Science
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 and
Technology
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 is not right. Not every student is interested in
Science
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, some might be interested in studying other
subjects
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. Getting
students
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 to
study
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subjects
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 that don't interest them can affect their performance and it might be possible they lose complete interest
for
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in
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 university
study
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.
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,
students
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 usually prefer a university which
offer
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subjects
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 of their interests and it is
also
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 observed that
students
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 score low in
subjects
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 they don't have interest in. To conclude, in my
opinion
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students
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 should always opt for the
subjects
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 they like, but that they must gain some
knowledge
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 in technological
subjects
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 so that they don't find themselves helpless in terms of scientific
knowledge
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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