Some people say that the Internet will soon become the preferred method of delivery of the news and information, causing the newspapers and magazines to gradually disappear. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include examples from your knowledge or experience.

The usage of the
internet
has come about in the
last
two decades, and now it touches every aspect of society. The
internet
regularly started taking over the newspaper and journal print media. Agreeably, the newspaper and newspaper will slowly disappear as the
internet
factor of transferring news and periodical will be more accessible and saves money.
First
of all, the range of the
internet
when it started was limited to a certain amount of countries,
however
, now one can access the
internet
magazine and journal wherever he is around the globe. Individuals access to the
internet
skyrocketed over the past two decades because of how it is easy to use.
For Instance
, many countries did not have the privilege to use the
internet
either because of military purposes or because of ignorance but, nowadays it is easier with the coming of the new generation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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