Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Human activity has had a bad effect on herbs and living beings around the globe. A few individuals believe that

this

cannot be changed,

while

others think steps can be taken to bring about a change.

Firstly

, it will discuss the reasons and

secondly

, the actions to bring the change. Breakthroughs in industrialization have already brought tremendous changes in all

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of human life, the world over.

Although

the government have started spreading awareness on saving trees, desertification and industrialization have already impacted greatly which led to the extinction of many

species

.

In addition

to

this

, erosion is the main cause of endangered

species

that cannot be changed and industrialization

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also

affected the polluting environment.

According to

a survey, researchers of the UN have predicted 1,00,000

species

are threatened with obsolescence

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this

year. Education, one of the most important factors in the development of the individual

in particular

should be given top priority. desertification is the main cause for the elimination of trees and animals,

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governments

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around the world

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a step forward to spread awareness among the public and outlaw logging, but

also

educate folks on how destructive our activities can be for herbs and animals. To cite an example, the South African government outlawed erosion in 2015 having impressive results, because of which many

species

have been saved. In conclusion, logging has caused the destruction of shrubs and living beings, which leads some

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to believe that

this

cannot be changed.

However

, in my opinion,

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and individuals can do several things to stop those activities, which

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our planet.