Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

Nowadays visiting new places is easier and cheaper.

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many countries have benefited from

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, some people consider that

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can have a negative effect

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the city and its population. Generally speaking,

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is an

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asset for many countries and cities which would be damage without it. Many small places are receiving an extremely high number of tourists every year and

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makes cities overcrowded.

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the different occasions I visited Venice the streets are always very busy and people need to wait to cross through small bridges.

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locals very stressed especially when they encounter big groups of tourists in every journey of your day.

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is another big problem about

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of the tourist sector, in

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while locals

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about the condition of their own towns many

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do not show respect for the place they are visiting.

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, my family who lives in the seaside are often complaining that visitors who come to the beach leaving plastic bottle and waste of food in the sand.

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impact

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the lives of locals and the environment, at the same time many of these cities depend on

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the tourist

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sector. Closing the door to tourists would cause

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much higher damage to local businesses who live of that. For

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would mean that hotels, restaurants and surf shops should close.

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would general a huge economic crisis. In conclusion, we can say that

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has a lot of negative

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the high economic support that gives to some places overweight the disadvantages.