Large business have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problem does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

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people
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popularity as well as marketing. They feel that advertising
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are always good as
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compared
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products
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. Sometimes peoples are blindly brought branded
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they do not think about value. So, because of that it directly impacted
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small
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advertise their
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via free advertisement facility like mobile phones,
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, via friends etc. and buy
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reasonable
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its helps to increase
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as well as in reasonable
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people
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brought good product
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with, in large
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workers are
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more and for paying their salary as well as increasing their
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they have to do advertisement compulsory. Marketing is the main source to send our message
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people
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due to marketing
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are attracted to buy
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things which are not needful for them.
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some discounts and offers are started
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value
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of that product is
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increasing.
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of
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small
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business
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not able to commercial their
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because
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of lack
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of money as well as ideas. So they are trying to do something different from
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and more benefits like sending their
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on
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group. It has nearly 500 rs
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advertising via family as well as friend and its more convenient method to marketing their
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. Because most of
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being has
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to discuss marketed
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and values with their friends. And
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is printing offers and discounts on paper and it
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in friends as well as on society notice board.these all methods have no more
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, marketing is
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source to develop
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-19
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pandemic
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company has proved
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how its
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are useful for
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hygene
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hygiene
properly and now
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is certified for
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of
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coronavirus
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, I conclude that marketing and promoting
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is the
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step towards development and growth towards
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. So, ever
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it may be small or big they
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responsibility
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the responsibility
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to advertise their product on their
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thinking
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it may be
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cost free
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or having
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