Large business have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problem does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
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percent
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per cent
people
are attracted Change preposition
of people
towards
popularity as well as marketing. They feel that advertising Change preposition
to
products
are always good as compaired
to Correct your spelling
compared
non advertising
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non-advertising
products
. Sometimes peoples are blindly brought branded products
they do not think about value. So, because of that it directly impacted towards
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apply
business
.
Personally
I think small Add a comma
,Personally
business
are also
advertise their products
via free advertisement facility like mobile phones, whatsapp
, printing Correct your spelling
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Whatsapp
pomplet
which have less Correct your spelling
complete
pamphlet
cost
, via friends etc. and buy products
on
reasonable Change preposition
at
cost
its helps to increase business
as well as in reasonable cost
people
brought good product
To begin
with, in large business
workers are also
more and for paying their salary as well as increasing their business
they have to do advertisement compulsory. Marketing is the main source to send our message towards
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to
people
. Moreover
due to marketing people
are attracted to buy such
a
things which are not needful for them. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Although
some discounts and offers are started then
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the
value
of that product is Add an article
the value
also
increasing.
Secondly
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the opposite
that is
small
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a small
business
which are
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is
business
because lack
of money as well as ideas. So they are trying to do something different from Change preposition
of lack
other
. Correct pronoun usage
others
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less Correct your spelling
Which has
Which
cost
and more benefits like sending their products
on whatsapp
group. It has nearly 500 rs Correct your spelling
WhatsApp
Whatsapp
cost
. Next
advertising via family as well as friend and its more convenient method to marketing their business
. Because most of human
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the human
tendency
to discuss marketed Add an article
a tendency
the tendency
products
and values with their friends. And last
is printing offers and discounts on paper and it distribute
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distributes
cost
.
Thirdly
, marketing is main
source to develop Change the article
the main
business
. For example
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situation Correct your spelling
pandemic
dettol
company has proved Change the capitalization
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to
how its Change preposition
apply
products
are useful for maintain
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maintaining
hygene
properly and now Correct your spelling
hygiene
dettol
is certified for Change the capitalization
Dettol
warrier
of Correct article usage
the warrier
corona virus
.
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coronavirus
Lastly
, I conclude that marketing and promoting products
is the first
step towards development and growth towards business
. So, ever business
it may be small or big they has
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have
responsibility
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the responsibility
a responsibility
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open-minded
then
it may be cost free
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cost-free
cost
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