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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

#growth #shops #towns #cities
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In
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 shopping in nearby shopping malls and cities.
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 essay disagrees with the statement. In-store shopping will never close in the future as it gives a chance to
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 will physically try the
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 rather than, surfing online. I will explain my viewpoints in the below paragraphs with examples. To commence with shopping, it depends on the
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 to
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, most of the busy
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 they want to
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 online because they do not have
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 to go out and
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.
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, If they have some
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 and want to purchase things in
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 they always visit any nearby store.
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, you are working in a company in that you were very busy with your workload. So, most of the
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 your
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 online.
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, If you are a student or you have leisure
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 to
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, you visit the nearest store to buy things.
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, the
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shop
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 never closes in the future as well. As
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 shopping having multiple advantages that
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 always love , you can physically see the
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, try it and make your mind based on your feelings. Nowadays, we have multiple
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 stores for a single
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 and multiple choices to see and feel.
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, If you want to purchase an item for your family
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 you visit stores with your family and they can choose based on their needs that not possible online. So, online shopping never take a place of all shops in towns and cities. In conclusion, In the future as well most
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 prefer
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 shopping
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 of online shopping due to its nature. Their
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 will not be able to feel and touch the
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 but in-store shopping they can try as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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