People feel that educational success is dependent on having a good teacher, others say it depends not the attitude of the student. Discuss both side and state your opinion*
Human life is unimaginable without education.
However
, some people argue that academic success completely depends upon the capabilities of an educator while,
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opinion
depends
upon the instructor.
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with, interest
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the interest
excellance
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excellence
For instance
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the same
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a few
proffessional
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Moreover
, all the students
are not equally inclined towards academic learning as a result
, they lack in their academic achievements but display magnificient
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magnificent
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, family values are also
of significant importance in determining their attitude towards educational learning. Students
having highly educated parents are more responsible towards achieving academic goals, unlike those who come from bussiness
background.
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business
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Nevertheless
teachers
are known "the
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in other words
, a strong nation. Firstly
, it has always been noticed that a good instructor can pull the weakest of his student to the top. Teachers
can create magic in the classroom to make their pupil learn difficult topics in an easy and interesting way. For example
, kindergarten teachers
help young and new pupils to adjust themselves into
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students
, thereby can help them to fill up academic gaps in a very smooth way, without putting much
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Finally
, educators can pressurise a student to the best of his abilities by creating sense
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a sense
hence
, allowing them to achieve academic success.
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even though
students
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to work hard for attaining
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the best
worst
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