Some people today prefer to get advice for medical problems and do not want to visit a doctor. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays,
medical
side is open for everyone who takes knowledge. All popularity has nearly 20 Correct article usage
the medical
percent
command on medical education. So, some human beings get preference to take advice for a health issue. In my thinking, it is a positive process because today living style is vast . but , sometimes taking appointment of doctor is a much better option.
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To begin
with, younger are not interested to visit Linking Words
a
expert because they have a busy schedule anyway, they prefer to get information via the internet. Change the article
an
For example
, in a metro city travelling time is nearly 2-3 hours. Due to these reasons, they choose online Linking Words
consultation
and Use synonyms
then
take medicines.
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Secondly
, some family they do not have the ability as well as they are afraid to Linking Words
face
physician because they shy to discuss their issue Use synonyms
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Although
, they go with taking advice from home and overcome Linking Words
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health problems. Change preposition
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for instance
, some women related health affection, ladies do not share their problems frequently in front of Linking Words
a
MD. Change the article
an
Moreover
, they prefer online treatment.
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Thirdly
, Linking Words
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conference is available on a different type of sites as well as many application are there. Add an article
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Moreover
, medicines are Linking Words
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accessible online via the application. On another hand, it is sometimes positive Linking Words
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negative. For Replace the word
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people
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consultation
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on the other hand
, for other treatment like scanning, Linking Words
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, MRI etc. they have to meet Add a hyphen
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medical
person. If they don’t follow Add an article
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therapy Linking Words
then
they get injured for a lifetime.
To be specific, every physician does not have an online service . equally, in the covid-19 pandemic situation, some Linking Words
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get online therapy as well as medicines but they have to visit Use synonyms
doctor
for collecting blood sample as well as sometimes for scanning Add an article
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people
can not find the bed in their nearest hospital. Use synonyms
That is
the main drawback of online Linking Words
consultation
other doctor don’t know about Use synonyms
people
history to do immediate therapy.
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Lastly
, in my conclusion, “ every coin has two side” online advice save time and they are needful for an emergency but, Linking Words
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beneficial for human. they go for both as per the situation.Linking Words
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