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A friend you made while you were studying abroad would like to spend a semester studying in your country. He/She has written to ask for your advice

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Dear Zoie, How are you? , I'm so happy to hear that you're coming to the Philippines and I'm more than happy to answer your all questions. No doubt you will like it here, particularly if you stay in Iloilo City. Basically, it's accessible to any kind of transportations ,
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 there are lots of accommodations to choose from.
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 as malls, groceries, hospital and universities. If you still intended to take up a medical course like what you've always said to me, I'd definitely recommend applying to Central Philippine University, which I graduated from it's one of the best and top universities in the country. It offers high-quality education and training. On top of that, a discount is given to all new enrollees and another thing is, a scholarship or tuition-free is
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 available. The university is highly competitive, so if you decide to apply, you'd better start to gather all your personal documents and previous school records and send them right away before June so you will be scheduled for the entrance exam. Please don't hesitate to write to me, I'm more than willing to help. Warmest wishes, Karla
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