Zoos are inhumane and pointless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Love them or loathe them,
zoos
have been part of the cityscape for over 150 years. Recently, Use synonyms
however
, many have questioned their value and the quality of care provided to the Linking Words
animals
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zoos
are cruel, Use synonyms
pointless
and ought to be phased out. Correct word choice
and pointless
Although
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zoos
have made great improvements over the years, there can be no doubt that the captive Use synonyms
animals
suffer. Not only are the enclosures usually far too small, but the climate and conditions are often completely unsuitable. Polar bears, Use synonyms
for instance
, travel across vast distances of ice daily and yet, in some tropical regions, they are kept in small pens with only a tiny pool for relief. Linking Words
In addition
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this
discomfort, zoo Linking Words
animals
can suffer stress Use synonyms
as a result
of being kept with unfamiliar and unrelated Linking Words
cage-mates
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cage mates
not to mention
the crowds of noisy visitors. In terms of conservation, Linking Words
while
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zoos
can assist in the preservation of endangered species, Use synonyms
this
effort is ultimately futile. The Sumatran tiger, Linking Words
for example
, has been successfully bred in captivity, Linking Words
however
, having been reared by humans, the captive population has lost its natural instinct to hunt, avoid humans, and raise its young. It would Linking Words
therefore
be impossible to re-introduce these creatures into the wild. As well as Linking Words
this
loss of instinct, there is Linking Words
also
the loss of habitat to consider. Urban sprawl, industrialisation, farming and logging all contribute to the destruction of habitat, meaning that even if a Linking Words
captive bred
population of pandas or tigers were ready for release, there is, in fact, nowhere left for them to go. In conclusion, Add a hyphen
captive-bred
zoos
may be able to keep Use synonyms
animals
alive but the quality of Use synonyms
this
life is poor and the Linking Words
animals
’ future prospects are bleak. Efforts should Use synonyms
instead
be made to preserve wilderness areas to ensure the long-term survival of species.Linking Words
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion