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Some people think that sports play an important role in society. Others think they are nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The importance of playing sports in our society which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming it is beneficial while others believe it
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 a leisure activity. The
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 we will discuss both sides and I completely agree with the former part of the question as sports does play a vital role in our life.
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, many people consider playing games like bowling, golf, board and computer games as a part of luxurious life because it involves a lot of money and time. As tools for playing bowling and golf
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 we are performing multiple things at a time. To hit the nail on the head, there are myriad reasons which
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 how essential it is to engage in physical activity to maintain our wellness.
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