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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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in recent years, reading the newspaper as well as watching the
news
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 on
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 has become the less favourable approach among youngsters. The causes of
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 phenomenon will be discussed in
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 essay with an attempt to suggest Solutions.
To begin
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 with, even though
newspapers
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 were an essential tool to
news
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 followers throughout the years, it has recently experienced the decline of popularity among the younger generation.
This
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 trend was a result of the emerges of alternative resources. These resources have offered
a unique aspects
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unique aspects
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 that
newspapers
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 lack.
In other words
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,
newspapers
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is
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are
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 no longer suitable for a revolutionary technology age. As phones
plays
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 an important role in every person's life, people prefer to read the
news
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 on their devices rather than paying
a
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newspapers
a newspaper
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newspapers
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.In fact, it gives them more advantages more than they expected. To clarify, by using their phones
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, they won't have to waste money nor time going to the market paying
a
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newspapers
a newspaper
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newspapers
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.
Moreover
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, phones
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an
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apply
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easy access to many different
news
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 websites. Another point to mention here is that
,
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 following
news
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 on
TV
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 could be boring as the person has
a
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apply
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less control
on
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over
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 which type of
news
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 should be presented.
However
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 , there are many possible suggestions that may help in attracting youngsters to
newspapers
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.
Firstly
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,
newspapers
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 companies should lessen the price in order to make it
optainable
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obtainable
 and expand their point of sales so it would be more reachable. Turning on
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TV
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the TV
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,
the
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they
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 most organize their work and make it more attractive. To conclude, following
news
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 on both
TV
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 and papers declined over the latest years.
Although
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 the main causes are reasonable there is a possible solution worth
taken
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 into consideration.
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