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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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Nowadays
people
 have direct effects on the world’s ecosystems,
humans
’ senses are the vital reasons for the loss of biodiversity.
First
, affirming
personal
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 level is the intelligible demand of
people
that is
 the cause of many environmental problems. Many
people
 think the value of themselves is performed by the unique accessories and clothing which is made from animal’s skin or bone.
This
 requirement makes a lot of hunters try to catch rare
animals
 and panther or pangolin is one of them. The cost of a
hymalayan
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Himalayan
 crocodile handbag is very high, it’s up to 100,000 dollars or higher and accessories made by elephant's tusk has valuable on the market.
Second
, the demand for soil use is increasing year after year, which makes the area of forests or
animals
' living space decrease.
Humans
 have been using forests to build many farms or houses, the number of trees cut down is
also
 the number of
animals
’ “houses” destroyed. All destruction is happening
everyday
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 and does not have any signs of
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stop
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.
Third
, many kinds of waste discharged to the environment by
humans
 are not only polluted
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 but are
also
 indirectly toxic foods for
animals
. In recent years, travel is growing and the appearance of
humans
 all around the world brings a lot of trash along. Many
people
 do not recognize that plastic bags, bottles or cans could be dangerous for
animals
. Many articles and researches publish the list of marine species that were falsely recognized as plastic trash as food. All listed above are so terrible,
humans
 could not imagine how the biodiversity will be. Should have many solutions for improving
humans
’ senses. Changing
people
’s conception by recognizing a lot of environmental campaigns, using eco-friendly materials daily, denounces
humans
 who use products made from rare
animals
.
Beside
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 communication activities, educating
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children
childrens
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children
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 to understand the importance of saving ecosystems is
also
 necessary.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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