Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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Nowadays
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have direct effects on the world’s ecosystems,
humans
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’ senses are the vital reasons for the loss of biodiversity.
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level is the intelligible demand of
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the cause of many environmental problems. Many
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think the value of themselves is performed by the unique accessories and clothing which is made from animal’s skin or bone.
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requirement makes a lot of hunters try to catch rare
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and panther or pangolin is one of them. The cost of a
hymalayan
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Himalayan
crocodile handbag is very high, it’s up to 100,000 dollars or higher and accessories made by elephant's tusk has valuable on the market.
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, the demand for soil use is increasing year after year, which makes the area of forests or
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' living space decrease.
Humans
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have been using forests to build many farms or houses, the number of trees cut down is
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the number of
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’ “houses” destroyed. All destruction is happening
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and does not have any signs of
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, many kinds of waste discharged to the environment by
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are not only polluted
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but are
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indirectly toxic foods for
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. In recent years, travel is growing and the appearance of
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all around the world brings a lot of trash along. Many
people
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do not recognize that plastic bags, bottles or cans could be dangerous for
animals
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. Many articles and researches publish the list of marine species that were falsely recognized as plastic trash as food. All listed above are so terrible,
humans
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could not imagine how the biodiversity will be. Should have many solutions for improving
humans
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’ senses. Changing
people
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’s conception by recognizing a lot of environmental campaigns, using eco-friendly materials daily, denounces
humans
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who use products made from rare
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.
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communication activities, educating
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children
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children
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to understand the importance of saving ecosystems is
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necessary.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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