Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

Nowadays, many
students
choose boarding
school
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because of the various conditions of their
home
and social life. Some people disagree
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while
others
say it’s the right choice for
students
during the course.
This
essay will discuss both views.  On the one hand, boarding schools are an opportunity to focus on
students
’ knowledge and exchange experiences with
others
.
In other words
, if parents decide to move their
child
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dormitory schools, their responsibilities to their
child
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children
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will decrease, which will help them with homework,
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care and feeding.
For instance
: A student  focuses on studying, reading and eating
according to
schedule in a dormitory but at
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he or she occasionally is distracted by helping with household chores or watching television.
Furthermore
,
students
will develop additional skills,
such
as
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decision- making
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, living in harmony with
others
and time management.  
Conversely
,
students
being away from
home
are faced with some problems of homesickness and
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influenced by
others
. It can be seen that some parents make bad choices for boarding school and they cannot completely control their child.
For example
, there may be the following negative aspects; children may be addicted to drugs or spend much time playing online games when they are away from
home
and
others
.  In conclusion, in the case of residential schools, there seem to be some positive sides for
students
learning about climate, but family members do not have complete control over their children.
Therefore
, it is important to create a comfortable learning environment and must be disciplined.
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Stick to this essay structure:

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  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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