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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or not agree

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Some people consider that teenagers should be demanded unpaid community
work
 in their free time. In my own opinion,
this
 idea has its pros and cons in equal measure so that I will discuss both sides below.
To begin
 with, all
children
 are the future of
this
 world.
Consequently
, it is vital to equip teenagers with
necessary
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 skills and experiences to help them deal with diverse kind of practical situations.
Children
 take
oppotunities
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opportunities
 to make use of their huge knowledge from school for community
work
instead
 of
gluing
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 their eyes to video game or television. With their professional skills,
children
 are able to not only
fulfill
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 their dreams but
also
 enhance life standard.
For example
, being volunteers for social activities makes adolescents know how to cooperate, communicate, manage,... which is useful for their growth and future job.
On the other hand
, all of us know that it is hard for youngsters to put up with pressure. Because of complex trouble at
workplace
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,
children
 can be overwhelmed by tension.
As a result
, adolescents go in fear of facing up with
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a problem
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 that affects their upbringing as well as future
work
 negatively. All in all,
this
 idea has its positive and negative effects on youngsters. Individual know what they really need for their life, adults should give teenagers good instructions and
then
 let them make their own decisions to do unpaid community
work
 or not.
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