Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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that tourists should respect other countries culture and rules, whereas other
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are not agree
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with that statement and think that these aspects are not important,
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host country has to be friendly to
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actual life.
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have a conflict with their children.
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, when
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, there is no denying that
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feel cultural shock regarding some different
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in various countries. So something which is absolutely normal for
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part of
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is horrible for another
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regarding wedding party in Europe and Asia. Respecting and changing some cultural rules can be helpful for all societies,
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it can help to improve some of them.
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it extremely important to make all conditions for tourists because as everybody knows it helps to improve economics in that country. To sum up, it is very important to exchange cultural
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, so it helps to improve societies and being loyal to other
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural understanding
  • cultural harmony
  • local customs and behaviours
  • host country's traditions
  • unintentional offense
  • enhance the travel experience
  • cultural fabric
  • inclusive society
  • diverse society
  • global understanding
  • mutual respect
  • respect for local customs
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