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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only governments can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#individuals #environment #governments #difference
Success in
Sport
 depends on several factors. About
this
topic
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 people discuss a lot and there are different opinions on what is most relevant for catching the
Succcess
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Success
. Some people believe that physical
strenght
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strength
 is important, others vice versa, mentioned that without mental
strenght
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strength
 you can not win. So, related to these opinions, in view of finding the hoe has right and hoe does not, I will try to explain what is most important for
succes
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success
 in
sport
. On one
hand
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 is most important to be prepared physically.
Body
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 needs to be used and adjusted at physical effort,
otherwise
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,otherwise
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 you can
distroy
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destroy
 your muscles and danger your organism.
Also
, to have performance and to win the
sport
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 game you need to be trained practically every day, so that required a good physical established. For
instanse
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instance
, nobody can win a swimming competition without knowing how to swim and
been
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 not
touth
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touch
 for
this
. On another hand, to be
succesful
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successful
 it is important to have mental
strenght
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strength
 too. For getting
good
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a good
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 result at
sport
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a sport
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 competition, your mind must be cleaned up from all wrong information, from doubts, fears, problems, etc... so, you should be concentrate just on the game and your own aim to win.
For example
, if you need to play chess but your mind is
somewere
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somewhere
 at home or work, you will not be able to focus on what you need to do.
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Overall
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Over all
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, both to be physical
strenght
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strength
 and mental
strenght
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strength
 heve importance for
a
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apply
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success in
Sport
,
in other words
 -You should
first
 be physical and mental ready than
go
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going
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aheed
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ahead
 and take your
trofey
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trophy
.
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