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Some people think that sports play an important role in society. Others think they are nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People are divided into two whether sporting activities is just a pastime activity or any other sign in society. Even though some consider it is a way of killing time, I think that it is not only for enjoyment but improves socialisation as well as
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 status. On the one hand, proponents who
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 believing game is the best way to enjoy their free time.
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 is mainly because some participants play only on June their holidays or during vacation, and due to
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, they often tend to think
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 just to enjoy, hardly they recognize its other benefits. Playing between club members,
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, in a family meeting: rarely do they find out other beneficial aspects of the gaming.
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, when practising different kinds of sports, which bring many advantages.
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, it could burn out extra fat and calories, and the
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 may be reduced, gradually, improves overall
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, While communicating with other group members tend to reduce social isolation and prevent chances of getting blues. To illustrate
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, many physicians have recommended joining
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 sports to enhance and boost immunity;
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, it is apparent that the importance of athletics. In my opinion, I view that
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 are both for leisure and well-being as
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 seems to have contributed strong support to the emotional and physiological
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 of mankind. In conclusion, despite people have different opinions about the net result of athletics, I think that its advantage cannot limit to
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, need to look into its
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 and social sides as well.
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