Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger. What is your opinion?

It is true that the amount of construction of nuclear

power

is increasing so fast. It is commonly asserted that nuclear

power

is a danger to our planet.

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personally believe that there is no strong evidence to justify

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First

and most obviously, if government build atomic

energy

station, the radiation

environment

may suffer.

That is

to say, the atomic

energy

station’s surrounding area considered a dead zone, it is prohibited to live as far as possible.

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,

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atomic

energy

station’s surrounding area there is no plants, animals, population and live.

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, it may negative far-reaching consequences for the

environment

,

Also

it becomes difficult to conserve valuable resources.

Additionally

,

although

nuclear

power

can produce a huge amount of

energy

, it is more likely that it damages the earth’s atmosphere. In, fact if the government do not build atomic

energy

stations

, which underlying cause of the destruction of green earth, there would be

such

issues with climate and natural habitats. It is more likely that people destroying their own planet.

Finally

, even if atomic

energy

has bad limited impacts

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the

environment

, countries day by day aspire to open nuclear

power

stations

. unfortunately, in

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big countries which have a lot of these

stations

, they decreasing large areas which are suitable for

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. To conclude, whilst increasing atom

energy

factories,

that is

important that decrease the number of atomic

energy

stations

, which harmful to the

environment

. I would argue that whilst the number of atomic

energy

stations

not increased yet so governments and scientists still should change their plans to preserve our valuable plane