Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger. What is your opinion?

It is true that the amount of construction of nuclear

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is increasing so fast. It is commonly asserted that nuclear

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is a danger to our planet.

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personally believe that there is no strong evidence to justify

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and most obviously, if government build atomic

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station, the radiation

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may suffer.

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to say, the atomic

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station’s surrounding area considered a dead zone, it is prohibited to live as far as possible.

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atomic

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station’s surrounding area there is no plants, animals, population and live.

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, it may negative far-reaching consequences for the

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it becomes difficult to conserve valuable resources.

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nuclear

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can produce a huge amount of

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, it is more likely that it damages the earth’s atmosphere. In, fact if the government do not build atomic

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stations

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, which underlying cause of the destruction of green earth, there would be

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issues with climate and natural habitats. It is more likely that people destroying their own planet.

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, even if atomic

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has bad limited impacts

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, countries day by day aspire to open nuclear

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stations

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. unfortunately, in

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big countries which have a lot of these

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, they decreasing large areas which are suitable for

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. To conclude, whilst increasing atom

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factories,

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important that decrease the number of atomic

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stations

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, which harmful to the

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. I would argue that whilst the number of atomic

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stations

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not increased yet so governments and scientists still should change their plans to preserve our valuable plane