In many developing countries, there are major problems with the quality of air and water caused by both industry and construction. What are some of these problems? And what solutions could be provided to prevent this?

Water

and

Air

are all

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important parts of our life, we can’t live without

water

and

air

. As though resources are polluted by various types of manufacturing and construction, it has a strong negatives

effects

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effect

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on

people

life.

This

essay will discuss some of

major

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the major

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issues and how to make

it

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them

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become better.

To begin

with, in terms of

water

pollution

, the main

problem

causes

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that causes

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the effluence is that the industrials waste was dumped into

water

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the water

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. Because the contaminated

water

can include lots of chemical substances and bacteria which can directly ruin our living environment and cause health

hazard

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hazards

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such

as: cancer, respiratory diseases, etc.

For instance

, Ha

Noi

is one of the most

develop

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city

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cities

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of

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Viet Nam where you can see so many buildings with lots of

factories

near urban. And To Lich River is

the

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great example of

water

pollution

. The river is surrounded by To Lich

people

’s houses and right

next

to the industrial zone. Life of

people

in that

place

are

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hard and

inconvenience

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because of the bad smells and the black

water

.

Health

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of

people

in that

place

usually in danger and always need support from

government

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more than

other

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in other

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places. To solve

this

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these

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problems government should seek to refresh the

place

and

use

the technology to take out the mud and industry’s oil under the

water

place

due to the fact that there so

much

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contaminates, and chemicals substances were oozed from near

factories

, and

also

, they need to replace the

manufacture

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manufacturing

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zone immediately because

this

can be the most useful solution for keeping the

water

resources clean.

Secondly

, about the

air

pollution

, the significant

problem

is the large amount

gas

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and fume are produced by

factories

and transportations.

Factory

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is

popular

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a popular

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problem

which

cause

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lots of

pollution

but when it’s come to the vehicles, they

use

the petrol to run so because of that there too much dust around us, even if I go out for a while

then

I come back home, I can see my T-shirt

was totally change

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the

color

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. Let’s take Ha

Noi

for example

again, with a lot of high buildings and Industries, Ha

Noi

can have both

kind

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of

pollution

water

can

air

. But

air

pollution

is the greatest damage to

people

’s living

in

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here.

Last

year, we were announced that the

air

density in Ha

Noi

was now up to

the

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dangerous level. That’s mean we can easily to respiratory diseases when

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breath

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in the

air

. We can tackle

this

problem

by using

the

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electronic transportations

instead

of petrol ones because it is not going to make dust and create a positive effect

to

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our atmosphere.

Moreover

, the

factories

which still need to

use

coal to produce one more time need to replace, but with the manufacture can

also

use

the electronic, manufacture using technology is not only

protects

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our living environment but

also

boost the working productivity. In conclusion,

air

and

water

pollution

are now at

alarming

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rate and it

cause

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causes

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so many diseases and destroys the environment. It makes

people

feel sick and tired of it. But nowadays, we have already found out solutions for those issues. And in my essay, I have chosen to

use

electronic

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instead

of petrol or gas.

Furthermore

, in

opinion

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use

technology is an effective way to overcome

these

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pollutions. What about you? How do you think?