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Science and technology have improved the standards of living in all over the world. Some people claim that the role of arts has become insignificant. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The present superior living standard is essentially attributed to the advancement in sci-tech.
Nontheless
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, some may claim that the phenomena
deduces
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 the value and
neccesity
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necessity
 of arts; I unequivocally disagree with the idea
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 and perceive art as the way of
life
 as well as an accurate indicator of a sophisticated evolution of
human
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. Science and technology allow us to lead convenient and comfortable lives that were precedently impossible. Uplifting the household and amenity facilities, technology enables people to live in
a
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more functional
environments
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 - ones that
acommodated
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accommodated
accommodate
 with cars, refrigerators, microwaves and washing machines - which significantly demonstrates the fundamental definition of "a good
life
."
However
, science cannot render the equivocation of "a beautiful
life
" without a touch of
aestheticity
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aestheticism
aesthetics
. Arts,
ont
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not
on
he
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other hand
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, attains an
irreplacable
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irreplaceable
 mental value to
human
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 as it does not merely reflect taste and lifestyle, but reserves as the marker for human evolution. Designer brands, interior design and handcrafting are the living proofs of the indisposable worth of arts that men crave. While museums hold countless artistic
contibution
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contribution
 of
human
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humans
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 that shape the history of our evolving way of
lives
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life
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. All pieces of artwork depict the craving and appreciation for
beauty
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 that are invaluable and untouchable by the course of time. In summary, even though science and technology are the main actors contributing to
a
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 betterment of
standard
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 of living, art conveys the quality and magnificent way of
life
.
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