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Some people think that sports play an important role in society. Others think they are nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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People are divided into two whether sporting activities is just a pastime
acivity
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activity
 or any other
significant
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 in society. Even though some consider it is a way of killing time, I think that it is not only for enjoyment but improves socialisation as well as
health
 status. On the one hand,
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proponent
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proponents
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 who is believing
sports
are
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 the best way to enjoy their free time.
This
 is mainly because
the
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some participants play only
in
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 their holidays or during vacation, and due to
this
, they often tend to think
this
 just to enjoy, hardly they recognise its other benefits. Playing between club members,
for instance
, in a family meeting: rarely do they find out other beneficial aspects of the gaming.
On the other hand
, when
practcing
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practising
 different kinds of
sports
, which bring many
adavantages
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advantages
.
Firstly
, it could burn out extra fat and calories, and the
body weight
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 may be reduced, gradually, improves
overal
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overall
health
.
Similary
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Similarly
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, While communicating with other group members tend to reduce
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social isolation
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social-isolation
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social isolation
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 and prevent chances of getting blues. To illustrate
this
, many physicians have recommended joining
such
sports
 to enhance and boost immunity;
thus
, it is apparent that the
imporatnce
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importance
 of
sports
. In my opinion, I view that
sports
is
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 both for leisure and
health
 as
this
 seems to have
contribute
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a
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strong support to emotional and
physiclogical
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physiological
health
 of mankind. In conclusion, despite people have
different
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opinion
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opinions
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 about the net result of sportings , I think that its
advanatage
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advantage
 cannot limit in entertaining,
instead
, need to look into its
health
 and social sides as well.
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