Some people believe that governments should ban dangerous sports even though others claim they should have the freedom to choose a sport to their liking. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Whether banning adventurous sports is essential or not divides sports enthusiastic into two. Since there

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some support the prohibition, others think that it is a personal choice. In my opinion, I personally think that,

instead

of imposing prohibitions, participants should be allowed to decide their participation in

such

dangerous activities: they need to be educated about possible consequences and properly trained to minimise any kinds of risks,

however

. Admittedly, dangerous games,

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river rafting and bungee jumping, have serious risk elements, but individual preferences need to be taken into account.

Hence

, it would be better if the government announces possible dangers rather than banning the

game

altogether.

Firstly

, when engaging

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game

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, the

sport

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personnel highly likely to get injured or hurt,

this

could be life-threatening as well.

Therefore

, it is particularly essential to educate them

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if anything went wrong, including death. Another point to consider here is to train and teach safety measures.

In other words

, how to wear different pieces of safety equipment, and all the members should be taught

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-aids.

Finally

, train both athletics organisers and athletes about how to approach the

game

and handle dangerous situations in a precise manner.

Otherwise

, if the adventurous games are banned by the authority, it would create many conflicts in society since

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could be considered as

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personal freedom. In conclusion, even though people have

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on conducting dangerous games, I think that everyone should be allowed to engage

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game

, but properly advised

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dangers and trained to be fit.