Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problem can a lack of sleep cause? What can be done about the lack of sleep?
The table below shows the results of two studies made in 1997 and 2006
,
and highlights what Remove the comma
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communication
abilities were essential for people
for their profession. The information goes back to 1997 and 2006 and covers two aspects of communication
named as
External and Internal. Change preposition
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This
separation of types of communication
makes to understand better the situation of people
were asked about what is relevant for their job.
I would like to mention, that such
surveys can be the strong support in time for the employees to predict the main futures and how is developed it, also
a possibility to pay attention to certain skills
more than others. For example
, if we analyse the table, we see that some abilities are more appreciate in 2006 than 1997
, which concluding that it will increase in future too.
So, going back related to the external Change preposition
in 1997
communication
box, we notice that 60 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
said that dealing with people
is the main ability for work in 1997, and 65 percent
in 2006, Change the spelling
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than
36 Replace the word
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percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
thinking that it is important advising
or caring for customers or clients in 1997 and 39 Change the verb form
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in 2006, followed by 24 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
of them hoe believes that it is good to know how to sell a product or service and 21 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2006, Change the spelling
per cent
finally
just a few of them are convinced that knowledge of particular products and services are the essential thing at the workplace. In comparison with people
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mentioned up are important too, lees the skill named selling a product or service.
The communication
within the company, in other
words
internal one, was research too, and we can see that in 1997 and 2006 the most popular activities was listening carefully to colleagues which are 38 Add the comma(s)
,words
percent
in 1997 and increase to 47 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2006. The Change the spelling
per cent
second
one is instructing or training people
with 25 percent
for 1997 and 30 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
for 2006. Change the spelling
per cent
This
information is followed by analysing problems together with other skills
with 20 percent
in 1997 and 26 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2006. Change the spelling
per cent
Further
the persuading or influencing others are Add a comma
,Further
also
elementary for people
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opinion is expressed by 16 percent
in 1997 and increase in 2006 with 5 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Planning activities is an almost important ability for 14 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
in 1997 and 15 percent
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people
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communication
skills
will be the dealing with people
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