The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement

It is often argued issue whether the ministry's entertainment expenditure is a waste of capital or the cabinet should be allocated

these capital

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in public services

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as

hospital

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, education and so on. I strongly agree with

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statement for the following reasons.

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with,

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education is the primary

needs

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for everyone and the government should invest more money

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this

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kind of amenities rather than relaxing sectors.

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, according to the survey said that more than 40%

women

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does

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not educate to their primary level in underdeveloped nations due to free education

has

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not provided equally.

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,

an

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apply

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entertainment activities are not important than basic needs

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, the ruling party should be funded a

buge

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huge

amount of money on public facilities.

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,

a

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quality of medical amenities can lead to

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society

irrubutably

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irrefutably

. People would like to live

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healthy community

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of relaxing factors.

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, many countries do not provide

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better and

modernate

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moderate

modern

medicial

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medical

treatment for their citizen

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, many deadly diseases can spread

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as

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Corona virus

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Coronavirus

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. To be more precise,

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entertainment

activities

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activity

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of spending capital is

a

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worthless when the public facilities not

fullfill

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fulfil

. To conclude, a person needs

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relaxing tools but the ruling party

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dose

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not

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fund a huge amount of resources on these kinds of

buidings

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buildings

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statement because the ministry should be allocated a huge amount of

monetary

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on

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satisfy the people's basic needs and wants

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as school and hospital. I hope

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trend is conducive for builds

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advanced nation.