The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement
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such
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, education and so on. I strongly agree with Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
this
statement for the following reasons.
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need
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in
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kind of amenities rather than relaxing sectors. For example
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of women
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not provided equally. Change the verb form
have
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, an
entertainment activities are not important than basic needs Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
hence
, the ruling party should be funded a buge
amount of money on public facilities.
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huge
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, a
quality of medical amenities can lead to Remove the article
apply
healthy
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a healthy
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irrefutably
a
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instead
of relaxing factors. For example
, many countries do not provide a
better and Correct article usage
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modernate
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moderate
modern
medicial
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medical
consequently
, many deadly diseases can spread such
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the Corona
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Coronavirus
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activities
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worthless when the public facilities not Change the article
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fullfill
.
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fulfil
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fund a huge amount of resources on these kinds of Change the verb form
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buildings
this
statement because the ministry should be allocated a huge amount of monetary
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money
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satisfy the people's basic needs and wants Change preposition
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such
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