International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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brings multiple advantages,

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as economic growth to several places around the world.

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, it raises some concerns and negative effects as well,

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, the contamination of nature. In

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essay, both sides of the coin will be discussed and analysed. On one hand, touristry as a business has brought multiple benefits to hundred of places,

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when talking about

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growth of those areas. There are entire countries which depend highly on

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is the case of Spain, where businesses related to travelling account for up to 40% of the whole income of the nation.

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, when a place is considered

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a popular touristic destination, it is almost sure that there is developed infrastructure to

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visitor's expectations and needs. It is

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worth

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that travellers arrive with different cultures and ideas that can inspire the locals to improve their own communities.

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excesive

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might have downsides too. There is always a concern about natural sites that can be harmed by the increase in the number of travellers,

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is particularly obvious in zones like beaches that end up completely full of

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after festivals that are held around them. Another negative impact of the

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of some popular areas

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is the affectation of locals, a

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example is Barcelona, there, local citizens started to complain about the

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amount of travellers in the city, it was

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for them to have a quiet stroll due to the noise and

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caused by visitors.

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, even though, there are positive and negative consequences of international

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, in my opinion, the benefits outweigh the disadvantages by far. The economic factor is crucial and communities can have the most from

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is regulated. In fact, the downsides can be minimized by local rules to protect the environment and promote

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more sustainable

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Topic Vocabulary:

enormous benefit
impact
local inhabitants
environment
disadvantages
outweigh
advantages
economic benefits
job creation
cultural exchange
infrastructure development
promotion
local products
environmental impact
exploitation
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cultural erosion
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International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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