🔶Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugar products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. 🔸Do you agree or disagree?

Many health issues have appeared by high levels of
sugar
used in
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food and drink production. Consumption of
sugar
should be declined by making it expensive. I agree with
this
idea because it can be beneficial to decrease using
this
ingredient and some diseases. In the following essay , the reasons for my agreement will be discussed. The main cause of making
sugar
expensive to reduce buying it would be the fact that when productions costs are high , it will be hard to purchase them .
Moreover
,
this
difficulty can be the cause of decreasing in
sugar
consumption.
Also
, reduction in
sugar
used encourages people to set other substances
such
as honey and brown
sugar
instead
of
sugar
which is healthier . As an example , drinking tea in
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breakfast with honey is healthier than
the
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sugar
and it is profitable to improve cardiovascular problems. It should be
therefore
said the
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public can not have a healthy living unless by taking less
sugar
in their meals that it would be possible by going up the
sugar
prices.
Additionally
, there is another reason to consider a high cost for
sugar
. There are many factories
which
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their food manufactures can not be produced unless by using
sugar
.
Furthermore
, manufacturers will not be able to purchase gross
sugar
because of its heavy expense .
Therefore
, The fewer factories can provide
sugar
, the fewer productions which contain
sugar
like
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, chocolate will manufacture and
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a gain
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on people health. In conclusion , in my view , if
sugar
is made expensive , it will
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a positive influence on health. Because consumption of
sugar
can go down as
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result of being difficult to provide.
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