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🔶Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugar products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. 🔸Do you agree or disagree?

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Many health issues have appeared by high levels of
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food and drink production. Consumption of
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 should be declined by making it expensive. I agree with
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 idea because it can be beneficial to decrease using
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 ingredient and some diseases. In the following essay , the reasons for my agreement will be discussed. The main cause of making
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 expensive to reduce buying it would be the fact that when productions costs are high , it will be hard to purchase them .
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 ,
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 difficulty can be the cause of decreasing in
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 consumption.
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 , reduction in
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 used encourages people to set other substances
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 as honey and brown
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instead
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 of
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 which is healthier . As an example , drinking tea in
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breakfast with honey is healthier than
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sugar
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 and it is profitable to improve cardiovascular problems. It should be
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public can not have a healthy living unless by taking less
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 in their meals that it would be possible by going up the
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 prices.
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 , there is another reason to consider a high cost for
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 . There are many factories
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 their food manufactures can not be produced unless by using
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.
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 , manufacturers will not be able to purchase gross
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 because of its heavy expense .
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 , The fewer factories can provide
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 , the fewer productions which contain
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 like
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, chocolate will manufacture and
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a gain
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 on people health. In conclusion , in my view , if
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 is made expensive , it will
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 a positive influence on health. Because consumption of
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 can go down as
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 result of being difficult to provide.
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