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The death penalty is best way to control and reduce serious crime. To what extent do you agree?

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 charts compare the changes
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 total ownership of housekeeping appliances and the number of hours of housework in a particular country during one hundred years. Overall, it can be seen that the ownership of three different electrical appliances had gradually
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 while the amount of time spent doing housework per week declined between 1920 and 2019. Among three appliances, vacuum cleaners in
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 of households increased sharply from zero to 100% in the
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 a turning point. Afterwards, they both changed steadily.
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