Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and methods of preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

by advancing

of

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technologies, fast and packed

food

has

became

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the most popular way to eat meals and it is very widespread for modern society. It means that

people

doesn't

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want

cook

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for

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their meals. I completely disagree that

people

want to find convenience

food

more and more.

First

of all, as times go by,

people

start to aware importance of

food

. In fact, nowadays

people

want to eat healthy

food

, even though they know most

of

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convenience

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food

are not healthy

such

as fast-

food

and frozen-packed meals from

convience

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convenience

stores. What's more,

people

think that authentic

food

, which their

parent

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parents

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cooked for them. It makes

people

remind their memory.

Thus

they can remember their family.

Secondly

, Authentic

food

means

to represent

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each

countries's

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culture. The human being they always

has

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been keeping their culture

thoughout

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throughout

the

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history. It means

people

want to preserve their traditional

food

.

For example

, some

people

still cook their meal even if it takes so long and

unconvenient

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inconvenient

.

Moreover

, some

people

think that fast

food

is not as delicious as traditional

food

.

That is

because its tastes are very

aritifical

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artificial

critical

,

however

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most of

traditional

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food

's tastes are very natural. To conclude,

although

there will be a lot of fast foods and convenience

food

are produced more and more,

people

knows

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what is healthy and beneficial for them.

Also

, they want to keep their identity.