Although many countries are becoming richer, these societies still have members who are poor and struggle each day to survive. why do you think this happens and what can wealthy societies do to help their poorer citizens ?

Despite the fact that a number of nations are getting wealthier, there are still a lot of poor people in these societies. There are various reasons why the gap between the rich and the poor continues to widen, but governments could certainly take steps to address

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issue. On the one hand, many reasons are supporting a result of income gap of between

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in wealthy countries.

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, big

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by rich people have more advantages to compete in market shares among the small businesses.

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can not be able to win in

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reduction war because they did not get the much cost discount or credit like the big

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get.

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usually involves with conflict of interest. People in

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and the

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staffs can make a deal with each

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can pay to be the winner of

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project bidding.

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, the nature of capitalism that let the

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wealthiest

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become more wealthy from their profits, while the

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are still struggling with

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each day. To prevent

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all of the mentioned causes, government and society can be the main force to tackle down

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problem

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various ways.

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of all, letting the small

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have a chance to grow by enforcing the law that preventing the big business groups to acquired more market shared.

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,

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have to be fair with all size of businesses, and

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its activities can be observed by the public

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so that the corruption rate could be reduced and lead to

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business game.

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, the

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have to give back to

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help

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class in society

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as organising donation events etc. In conclusion,

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plenty of solutions can be used to

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tighten

the gap between the

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and the

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poor

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