Some people say that culture will be ruined if it is used as tourism revenue while other say it is good way to preserve culture discuss both views and relevant example?
Culture and tradition of every
countries
,refect the Change to a singular noun
country
heritage
of that region.Most of
Change preposition
apply
Correct article usage
the nation
nation
,rely on tourism sports for economic Fix the agreement mistake
nations
purpose
.A group of people suggest that culture will Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
lost
their original identity and value Change the verb form
lose
be lost
,
if they are used for commercial Remove the comma
apply
purpose
.Some opine that it is Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
conservative
way to save the Add an article
a conservative
heritage
.I concur with Add an article
a later
the later
later
view.
On the one hand,tradition will Correct your spelling
latter
be deteriorated
if Change to the active voice
deteriorate
have deteriorated
nation
used it for making money.Due to human impact Correct article usage
the nation
such
as pysical
touched ,click photographs and thrashing Correct your spelling
physical
garbagge
Correct your spelling
garbage
garage
overthere
,which could gradually destroy the original splendid and meaning of that place.For instance ,Correct your spelling
over there
the
one of seven Correct article usage
apply
wonder
,Change to a plural noun
wonders
Taj
Mahal , gradually gets fade by photons of camera light,Correct article usage
the Taj
altough
photographs strongly prohibited over there.Correct your spelling
although
As a result
,heritage
of the nation Add an article
the heritage
a heritage
,
lost Remove the comma
apply
their
natural identity.
Correct pronoun usage
its
On the other hand
,keeping heritage
alive,toursim
is Correct your spelling
tourism
effective
way .Most of Add an article
an effective
tourism
industry ,spend Add an article
the tourism
huge
amount on look afters of the products and maintains the original condition of the Add an article
a huge
heritage
.Customes
are needed to be conserves with Correct your spelling
Customer
Customers
passage
of time ,which could help in enhancing their life.Add an article
the passage
For instance
,Mother
Correct article usage
the Mother
teresa
statue in India famous tourist attraction ,each year official authorities spend Million Change the capitalization
Teresa
rupees
on their Change preposition
of rupees
maintaince
.
In conclusion,Correct your spelling
maintenance
although
tourist destinations gets
affected by tourism,but keeping Change the verb form
get
heritage
alive and maintaining its original identity also
duty
of Add an article
the duty
a duty
Correct your spelling
tourism
toursim
field.Correct article usage
the toursim
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