You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems

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Dear Mr Henley, I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to the issues which I have been encountering at work and hoping that you would address my problems. I want to let you know that my computer system shows some anomalies and whenever I try to log into a particular process portal, it automatically restarts. Due to

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, my work is suffering.

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my colleagues have to manage the work on their own and because of

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they are getting disappointed with me. Even after raising multiple complaints to the support team, nothing has been done so far. Under these circumstances, I am unable to fulfil my assigned tasks on time. I feel these challenges can be fixed by replacing the laptop with another reliable system.

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, I request you to take necessary action to resolve my computer problem and

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would like to suggest that the IT support team must do a vigilant check prior to assigning the system to duty staff since it affects the executive’s performance. I look forward to your response regarding

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matter. Yours sincerely, Swathi kamalkar

Manpreet KaurThu Jul 01 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

184 words

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