Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this and what solutions do you suggest?

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The act of bullying
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problem in many educational facilities and a number of factors have been identified as responsible.
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causes and profer some solutions.
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with, oppression is an action that brings discord amongst students and is majorly due to the need to be recognised, heard or seen as superior to their mates.
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who
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or respect of some sort.
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, my nephew occasionally intimidated a fine girl in his
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because he admired the girl and demanded her respect and friendship,
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, he went about it the wrong way.
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, students with little or no drive to study may coerce teachers to improve their
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with the aim of exiting a
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, a cultist who never participated in a practical
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threatened his lecturer to alter his mark to enable him
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to the
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, reduced
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be a primary factor for tormenting classmates, as students who lack self-confidence may intimidate others as a decoy to boost their confidence. A number of solutions have been proposed to bring about
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of bullying in the academic system,
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resulting in a better environment for studying.
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, all institutions should put out a law against bullying and enforce
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regulation by metting out a punitive measure to culprits.
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, a classmate of mine in
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year who was caught threatening his lecturer was rusticated,
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sending out a clearer picture to others.
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, all sections of academic institutes should have a psychologist or psychiatrist attached to their medical team
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that people who find it difficult to express themselves socially or battle with reduced
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are willingly able to seek help and achieve the support they require through
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a phase. In conclusion, a number of factors responsible for coercion in schools can be easily combatted with the proposed solutions aforementioned. As continuous bullying has
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on the recipient,
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an end should be put to
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happening.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bullying
  • Harassment
  • Intimidation
  • Diversity
  • Adolescent
  • Mimic
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Cyberbullying
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Awareness
  • Conflict resolution
  • Peer mediation
  • Consequences
  • Respect
  • Kindness
  • Open communication
  • Vulnerable
  • Buddy system
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