All parents want the best орportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children's future. Discuss both sides and givе your opinion.

Some parents think that

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is necessary and it gives to

pupils

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knowledge about math, geometry and history while

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think that

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should teach

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some profession

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as architecture, builder, driver and so on. Personally, I think that learning is

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important thing in our life. In

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will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

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,

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should say that knowledge adorns a person and he will be more confident if he will understand all. What

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mean by

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is that

pupils

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should get information at

school

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and enter the university.

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, if we compare excellent

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and bad we can understand that they

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different worldwide and

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percentage

of productivity in

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from British resources.

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fact claim to study.

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, we can understand that skills

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important for

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for one reason thinking.

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words

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it means that they can start to think as

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an elderly

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person

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people

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and

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with them as well as they can.

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, I have a friend his name is Michael and he

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to

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without study at

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because he

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to

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and start to love earning money. In conclusion,

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strongly recommend

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apply

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studying and learning

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the subject

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subject

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as well as you can .