3. Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do advantages of this trend outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Model Answer:

The diagram shows the design for a
wind
turbine
and its location. It is observing that
machine
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consists of four parts, which are connected between them. Altogether, have
main
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role of
energy
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producing
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, by following all
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needed to obtain it. A
wind
turbine
looks like a huge fan.
This
resemblance is caused whereas, it is formed of
high
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steel tower, and blades which are made of fibreglass or wood.
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, the
machine
has
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and a
wind
sensor.
This
design makes that the
turbine
can achieve
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natural
energy
and at the same time does not spoil the landscape. The diagram illustrates how the
machine
works. The process starts when the wave goes to blades,
then
the sensor determines the speed and direction of
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, the wave is generated and afterword the
energy
is produced. The
wind
turbine
can be located at different places. It is seen that the
turbine
can be located
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straight land, in water, near home by
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and on
high
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point of
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. The one situated near home was named as domestic
turbine
, but another situated on the open spice territory has a small building
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near by
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and are checked by a computer. In comparison, it
is shows
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that the optimum location of the
machine
is at the top of
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, by
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and in the water, because there is generated
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of
wind
strengths. In general,
wind
turbines are the future and it is
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a simpler
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way to generate
energy
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritize
  • career advancement
  • financial and professional stability
  • upbringing
  • societal norms
  • family planning
  • medical science
  • viability
  • complexities of parenthood
  • financially stable
  • emotionally mature
  • nurturing environment
  • health risks
  • late pregnancy
  • demands of parenting
  • balancing
  • quality of family life
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