‘Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?
In the modern world,
peoples
need to be more charitable Fix the agreement mistake
people
for
those suffering from unemployment, poverty, and alienation spending a Change preposition
to
small-scale
of their Correct your spelling
small scale
earning
. Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
According to
me, I feel that Linking Words
donation
is the most impressive action of a human being, and I will explain why in Use synonyms
this
essay. Linking Words
Firstly
, a small amount of Linking Words
donation
gives significant power-ups Use synonyms
for
Change preposition
to
who
lost their expectation. By Correct pronoun usage
those who
Linking Words
this
we mean that anyone who Add a comma
this,
decided
to spend particular money for a low standard of living provides a positive impact on society. Wrong verb form
decides
Moreover
, a charity campaign is not limited by how much wealth or money you spend. It Linking Words
expresses
by awareness and illustrates by action you performed. Wrong verb form
is expressed
In other words
, we have considerable ability to Linking Words
stand-up
Correct your spelling
stand up
Change preposition
to one
one
who suffer. Correct pronoun usage
those
Finally
, a morsel of Linking Words
diner
that we put in the garbage bin, has Replace the word
dinner
a
possibility to provide someone for a whole day. Correct article usage
the
For
Linking Words
this
reason, there are other ways for Linking Words
donation
using consolidated saving that Use synonyms
we
Correct pronoun usage
apply
cuts-off
unnecessary costs. Correct your spelling
cuts off
On the other hand
, those who Linking Words
getting
Wrong verb form
get
Use synonyms
donation
tend to be Fix the agreement mistake
donations
more
dependent mentality, avoiding employment. Add an article
a more
For instance
, Linking Words
according to
the unemployment report of Mongolia in 2020, ten Linking Words
percent
of all able-bodied citizens live with welfare funds provided by the state. Change the spelling
per cent
Nevertheless
, there are plenty of population among us Linking Words
awaiting
for support from society. Correct your spelling
waiting
Although
it is assumed that, their lifestyle could be better by helping them with our small amount of Linking Words
donation
. Use synonyms
To conclude
, I believe that Linking Words
donation
is Use synonyms
the
impressive activity for Correct article usage
an
who
suffering Correct pronoun usage
those who
in
poverty, loneliness, and Change preposition
from
homeless
. Charity is the Replace the word
homelessness
heart touching
operation that makes someone’s life better.Add a hyphen
heart-touching
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion