As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn a different language and culture. Do you agree or disagree?

As
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the rapidly
developing
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of the internet and transportation systems,
students
can access more information about other
countries
and visit or live over there. Obviously, they will have more choices and can experience more in their lives. I think it is worth
to
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living and studying in a foreign country for every student.
First
of all, different
countries
have completely different cultures and lifestyles, people can learn from the differences and improve their lives.
For example
, citizens in oriental
countries
have busier timetables, most of them have to use the 996 work schedule. They think life is too short and should do more to get more opportunities. But in western
countries
, people consider more about their life qualities, they travel more and relax more.
Students
living or learning in different
countries
can have a better understanding of the world and can make more suitable decisions in the future. About the education, learning a
secondary
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language in the native speaking country is much more effective.
Students
can have more opportunities to communicate with some native speakers and even live together with them. Apart from language, learning other subjects like engineer or science in developed
countries
are better.
For example
in some western
countries
,
they
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have open and perfect academic systems. Most universities have sufficient foundations and infrastructures to supply their
students
and teachers. What is more, we can make friends and create more connections while living or learning in different
countries
. Both can magnify
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impacts of our works and contributions. We can broaden our life horizons to help each other and
fulfill
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ourselves. In conclusion, I agree that
students
should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country. It is helpful to improve themselves since they can experience more and learn language more effective.
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