Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.

In many countries, smoking tobacco in public places is forbidden by the law while other countries have no purpose of doing it.
However
it is against human rights, it
also
affects others'
health
in a negative way and can be the cause of increasing serious diseases. We will discuss both sides of the topic. On the one hand, countries
where have allowed indoor smoking in bars and restaurants
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, where have allowed indoor smoking in bars and restaurants,

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made their decision on local places. It is important for governments to hear and state other’s opinions to make law. They cannot make their decision against human rights.
Thus
majorities' points of view play a major role in decisions to make for the public.
Good
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example of
this
is Florida where smoking-free,
however
, bars and restaurants still allow smoking.
On the other hand
, states have banned smoking where they claim that smoking indoors can be harmful to the
health
for
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those who are surrounded
by
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. It is quite a serious issue of public
health
as well. It leads to
increased
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an increased

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risk of public heart disease, cancer and
damaging
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a damaging

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impact on
lungs
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the lungs

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. Especially the almost 100 million Americans who are suffering chronic conditions
such
as asthma and bronchitis because they smoke permanently everywhere and
everytime
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. In conclusion, banning smoking can help improve the
health
of the general population.
As a result
of the improvement, hospital overwork can be reduced in the
long-term
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.
Benefits
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The benefits

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of smoking in public places can make it easier for people who have the intention to quit and prevent
from
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apply

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future diseases.
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