Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.

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In many countries, smoking tobacco in public places is forbidden by the law while other countries have no purpose of doing it.
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it is against human rights, it
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affects others'
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in a negative way and can be the cause of increasing serious diseases. We will discuss both sides of the topic. On the one hand, countries
where have allowed indoor smoking in bars and restaurants
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made their decision on local places. It is important for governments to hear and state other’s opinions to make law. They cannot make their decision against human rights.
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majorities' points of view play a major role in decisions to make for the public.
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example of
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is Florida where smoking-free,
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, bars and restaurants still allow smoking.
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, states have banned smoking where they claim that smoking indoors can be harmful to the
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those who are surrounded
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. It is quite a serious issue of public
health
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as well. It leads to
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risk of public heart disease, cancer and
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a damaging
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impact on
lungs
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the lungs
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. Especially the almost 100 million Americans who are suffering chronic conditions
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as asthma and bronchitis because they smoke permanently everywhere and
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. In conclusion, banning smoking can help improve the
health
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of the general population.
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of the improvement, hospital overwork can be reduced in the
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.
Benefits
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The benefits
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of smoking in public places can make it easier for people who have the intention to quit and prevent
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future diseases.
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