Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.
It appears that you are missing a comma or two with the interrupter where have allowed indoor smoking in bars and restaurants. Consider adding the comma(s).
The noun phrase Good example seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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Everytime is not a word. Replace this with the two separate words — every time.
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Your opinion
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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?