The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from the school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?

Nowadays, in everyone’s life,

education

has become crucially important as it teaches everything required for

modern

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to live contentedly. Some people think that the

education

which has been taught by teachers in

school

is more important than receiving

education

from family. In

this

point of view, I agree with the statement and in

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essay, I will explain my opinion with supporting examples. The main obstacle would appear to be that the

education

from

school

is more systematic and deep. What I demonstrate by

this

is that teachers exactly know what they are teaching to students. Not only, the information they receive from

school

have

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structure but

also

, it is well proven.

For example

, high

school

students will be taught

high level

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math not the basic level.

Additionally

, children will be offered social experiences by

school

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. Meaning that

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a wide range of external activities. By

this

, they will learn moral values

such

as tolerance and sharing.

Moreover

, they will be certified when they graduate. Definitely,

this

might help them to choose what to become when they grow up. These would in turn give a springboard to their future achievements and wider success. Admittedly, I agree with those who argue that the

education

from family is more important compared to that of from schools. Due to the

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parents can respond to what their children need and how they learn best.

For example

, due to my parents know that my brother loves Naruto, they bought him a comic book which is about Naruto as a spelling book, now he is excelled in reading.

However

, most parents may not have the necessary knowledge or resources. To summarize, a mix of teaching from

school

and family would be the finest way.