Countries should produce the food that their population eat, and import as little as possible. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

All the people around the world want to
taste
something new. For
this
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these
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reasons
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all governments should think about
attraction
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the attraction
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of
food
and their spreading
also
this
can be dangerous and perilously for
economy
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. I definitely agree with
this
statement that
food
will be in every country and I will give some good illustrations.
Firstly
,
i
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I
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want to mention that humanity developing and creating new
food
recipes and does not reveal
their
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its
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secrets.
However
, we have preservatives and some chefs packs in cases and import their
food
.
For example
, if we come to the shopping
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mall
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moll
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mall
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or some shops with the sector of
food
we can find some preservatives with seafood or tropic fruits from
other country
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another country
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i
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mean something new to
taste
.What
i
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mean by
this
that
this
is insane that we can afford to buy some new
food
and
taste
it in our
coutry
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country
.
On the other hand
, we can
uderstand
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understand
that
this
kind of nourishment can be harmful or spoil for many factors
such
as delay, bitting of something or hold back and so on . For
instanse
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instance
, 30 percentage of goods can not be intact or
uningured
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uninjured
uninsured
.
In other
words
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this
is a big blow to big business.
Also
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we can bring
food
from other countries and hire chefs to cook unusual
food
. But,
personally
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,personally
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i
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I
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do not agree with
this
cause of
this
delivering the product. In
conclution
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conclusion
,
i
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I
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strongly believe that countries will be able to accept and distribute their
food
in
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other countries and we can
taste
all the foods around the world.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-sufficiency
  • trade dependency
  • food security
  • sustainable agriculture
  • local economies
  • carbon footprint
  • supply chain
  • food miles
  • agricultural sector
  • domestic production
  • import substitution
  • food sovereignty
  • global supply chains
  • trade imbalances
  • food standards
  • economic resilience
  • biodiversity
  • cultural heritage
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