In Some countries ,government pays unemployment people .How would this effects on people and on other people,do you agree with this or not

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Nowadays ,
unemployment
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rate has been becoming an alarming
issues
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for many countries .To combat
with
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this
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issues ,regimes provide weekly allowance to the unemployed
people
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,which they can use to
fullfill
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fulfil
in their basics needs.Some
people
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said it is
unjustice
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injustice
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for those who are regular
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taxpayers
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tax payers
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taxpayers
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.I concur with
former
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perspective ,government supports make
the
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unemployed
people
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independent. On
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first
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hand ,official authorities should provide helps to those who really
wants
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to do
job
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but due to some
reasons
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they don't
gets
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job
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or loss their work.During
such
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condition
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,it
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makes the duty of
people
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government that they use allowance on essential works.
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year during the corona pandemic ,Canda government gives $ 2000 to each person who
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their job.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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